Post by yogurtfresh on May 2, 2007 14:03:53 GMT -5
this is a story i'm working on about a young member of the Malaphar dragoon guard named Rathalos Fyresong, and his position to guard the dead kings son, who is just turned fourteen, to his crowning.
He befreinds the new king, ready to resive the crowning at the destination of the nation of Spireus, and gets caught up in the politics of a war started between Nirtis (led by Prince Getris the Macabre) and Falkor (ruled by Queen Delphie), two other nations on the sides of Spirus, threatening the kings saftey on his journy to the crowning.
As More and more nations are forced to choose sides, Rathalos' judgments are effected by that of the new King Hereke. and as Herekes chosen bride takes kindly towards Rathalos, his whole personal world breaks as the kings stops their freindship and expells him from his personal guard and army and cast into the nation of Gesesch, who seem neutral in the war, halfway along the journey.
he joins a secret orginisation in order to gain some money, after being reduced to a begger, and his first job, Assasinate King Hereke.
that is a reif summary of the first few chapters of what i'm planning to write, it will continue with the kings attempted assasination, Rathalos' jailing, escape with the help of a former freind in the guard, who describes Herekes as going power hungry, and the kings older brother, of whom was taken by the kings evil advisor who is behind the whole war.
the story will have action, violance,sex, magic, politics and dragons.
what do you think.
He befreinds the new king, ready to resive the crowning at the destination of the nation of Spireus, and gets caught up in the politics of a war started between Nirtis (led by Prince Getris the Macabre) and Falkor (ruled by Queen Delphie), two other nations on the sides of Spirus, threatening the kings saftey on his journy to the crowning.
As More and more nations are forced to choose sides, Rathalos' judgments are effected by that of the new King Hereke. and as Herekes chosen bride takes kindly towards Rathalos, his whole personal world breaks as the kings stops their freindship and expells him from his personal guard and army and cast into the nation of Gesesch, who seem neutral in the war, halfway along the journey.
he joins a secret orginisation in order to gain some money, after being reduced to a begger, and his first job, Assasinate King Hereke.
that is a reif summary of the first few chapters of what i'm planning to write, it will continue with the kings attempted assasination, Rathalos' jailing, escape with the help of a former freind in the guard, who describes Herekes as going power hungry, and the kings older brother, of whom was taken by the kings evil advisor who is behind the whole war.
the story will have action, violance,
what do you think.