Post by yogurtfresh on Mar 28, 2007 22:02:42 GMT -5
or supervilleins whatever.
anyway before i start i want to say i put this hee because i want to encourage people to get creative rather then have it classed as a game.
so anyway what it is that i've had a fascination of superheros for aslong as i can remember and lots of my time i spent working on ideas and i finally think i have one.
anyways what this thread is about is i want people to start posting there own made up superheros n this thread as well as coming to critsizepraise other peoples. i dont want this to be a game more of a 'collection of thoughtful art' so thats why i put it here.
so i may aswell get started, and i hope that other people are going to contribute aswell.
my superhero is callled Penance.
his actualy nameis Noah Thorn and he's the adopted son of a samurai who grew up to work with a secret service agency. anyway in the start of the story he gets tainted with demon power by being possesed by Damien, son of the helllord, who wants to posses a body so he can physically manifest himself on earth to create havoc upon it.
(the helllord if your wondering is the devil to you and i but i want to escape using terms like god a satan to avoid contriversy)
but having sacrificed his body for that of the angel, whome Damian was to origionally posses, the angel (who turns out to be the Archangel of pity) offers his spirit to Noah and Damian is driven out.
Noah fights Damian using his new angel powers and drives him awayfor now.
this esablishes Damien as his arch villen and the superhero is generally a half angel half demon vigilante crimefighter against fallen agels and demonic hordes
his powers are that of the angel of pity, e.g flight super speed and can see other angels and demons on earth. but after his possesion he got the powers of a demon to, that pretty much all the powers of and angel exept lust for souls and extreme violent behaviour.
he has nor got the demons eye (red cat eye with firey pupil, the eyee itself doesn't do anything), on his left side with he covers with shades by day and a mask in his superhero costume.
his supehero costume is sort of like monks robes exept black and slimer, and apart from his superpowers his weapons include a long katana and a hangun of which he fires magical holy demonbane bullets after the gun is divinitized (ones he turned into angel form) or just toal destruction bullets once it is demonized (you know what i mean)
the idea came from many of my favorate superheros. i got the vigilante crimefighter parts from heros like Blade or Dante, whereas when he get antagonised or frustrated alot he demoizes is sort of from The Hulk. also childishly got the power being left behind by Damien is sort of like harry potter and lord volemort.
alies? not any specific ones but useually just other angels, no specific one but i'm thinking of having the angel of *insert cool emotion for name* enemy as i said are either fallen angels or demons. i've made up the fallen zodiac which are fallen angels whith powers and looks of the signs of the zodiac with archdemon zodias as their leader, each one acts as damian pperonal bodyguard.
and i'm thinking of having penance fight his own demon form at one point. sort o like prince-dark prince or spiderman-venom type of thing.
long winded i know but thats my idea. this time i'm up for ANY critism but please mmake it constructive. note that i did not make this up on the spot.
anyway before i start i want to say i put this hee because i want to encourage people to get creative rather then have it classed as a game.
so anyway what it is that i've had a fascination of superheros for aslong as i can remember and lots of my time i spent working on ideas and i finally think i have one.
anyways what this thread is about is i want people to start posting there own made up superheros n this thread as well as coming to critsizepraise other peoples. i dont want this to be a game more of a 'collection of thoughtful art' so thats why i put it here.
so i may aswell get started, and i hope that other people are going to contribute aswell.
my superhero is callled Penance.
his actualy nameis Noah Thorn and he's the adopted son of a samurai who grew up to work with a secret service agency. anyway in the start of the story he gets tainted with demon power by being possesed by Damien, son of the helllord, who wants to posses a body so he can physically manifest himself on earth to create havoc upon it.
(the helllord if your wondering is the devil to you and i but i want to escape using terms like god a satan to avoid contriversy)
but having sacrificed his body for that of the angel, whome Damian was to origionally posses, the angel (who turns out to be the Archangel of pity) offers his spirit to Noah and Damian is driven out.
Noah fights Damian using his new angel powers and drives him awayfor now.
this esablishes Damien as his arch villen and the superhero is generally a half angel half demon vigilante crimefighter against fallen agels and demonic hordes
his powers are that of the angel of pity, e.g flight super speed and can see other angels and demons on earth. but after his possesion he got the powers of a demon to, that pretty much all the powers of and angel exept lust for souls and extreme violent behaviour.
he has nor got the demons eye (red cat eye with firey pupil, the eyee itself doesn't do anything), on his left side with he covers with shades by day and a mask in his superhero costume.
his supehero costume is sort of like monks robes exept black and slimer, and apart from his superpowers his weapons include a long katana and a hangun of which he fires magical holy demonbane bullets after the gun is divinitized (ones he turned into angel form) or just toal destruction bullets once it is demonized (you know what i mean)
the idea came from many of my favorate superheros. i got the vigilante crimefighter parts from heros like Blade or Dante, whereas when he get antagonised or frustrated alot he demoizes is sort of from The Hulk. also childishly got the power being left behind by Damien is sort of like harry potter and lord volemort.
alies? not any specific ones but useually just other angels, no specific one but i'm thinking of having the angel of *insert cool emotion for name* enemy as i said are either fallen angels or demons. i've made up the fallen zodiac which are fallen angels whith powers and looks of the signs of the zodiac with archdemon zodias as their leader, each one acts as damian pperonal bodyguard.
and i'm thinking of having penance fight his own demon form at one point. sort o like prince-dark prince or spiderman-venom type of thing.
long winded i know but thats my idea. this time i'm up for ANY critism but please mmake it constructive. note that i did not make this up on the spot.