a love poem... READ NOWZ!!!

[sudokai]

Here's mine
Love at first sight


to my job i go
minding myself
out of the corner of my eye
a girl i spy
with avoice of an angel
love at first sight

her name i ask
and
across her face
ared blush awaits
a small grin widens
love at first sight

a glance at my watch
i was late for my job
i realized i was fired
a look at the girl
and tears race to her chin
"sorry" she cries
love at first sight

then she lay in my arms
a kiss given
"a gift from me" the girl says
another long kiss she gives
Love at first sight

a little cheezy, i know but its the best i got

[Faye]

Wow...Fictional. You're talking about Romeo-Juliet speed here. That girl mention in your poem is a total sl*t.

[yogurtfresh]

love at first sight isn't that fast...