sudokai
Apprentice
i am sudokai! bow before my awesome power! i shall smite any infidals THAT STAND IN MY WAY!!!!
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Post by sudokai on Apr 4, 2008 20:37:47 GMT -5
Here's mine Love at first sight
to my job i go minding myself out of the corner of my eye a girl i spy with avoice of an angel love at first sight
her name i ask and across her face ared blush awaits a small grin widens love at first sight
a glance at my watch i was late for my job i realized i was fired a look at the girl and tears race to her chin "sorry" she cries love at first sight
then she lay in my arms a kiss given "a gift from me" the girl says another long kiss she gives Love at first sight
a little cheezy, i know but its the best i got
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Post by Faye on Apr 6, 2008 22:10:51 GMT -5
Wow...Fictional. You're talking about Romeo-Juliet speed here. That girl mention in your poem is a total sl*t.
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